Monday
7 January 2013
Today,Miss Zu wanted us to bring laptop for commenting each other in the blog.
I dont have a laptop because my brother borrowed my laptop before
this.So I tried to lend a laptop from my friends to do a commenting.
After I bought a laptop,we need to surfed internet from Dewan
Seri Peria.Unfortunately, wifi UITM at Dewan Seri Peria was very slow
and most of my friends couldn't access the internet.Then Miss zu want us
went to library for access the internet.
We arrived at library and surfed internet at computer lab.I
opened my blog and comment my friends blog.I am very shock because my
follower have one person..The person is Izzat..My blog was quietly not
popular than others..So our class was dismiss at 4 o'clock
Tuesday, 19 February 2013
Tuesday
29 January 2013
Today we continues our presentation and Miss zu accepted our thesis statement. Alhamdulillah we grateful
because our thesis statement accepted.
Beside that,others thesis statement for another group also accepted,however only two group still rejected.
After that,we need to do outline for our essay.
29 January 2013
Today we continues our presentation and Miss zu accepted our thesis statement. Alhamdulillah we grateful
because our thesis statement accepted.
It is indeed that baby hatch provided by government is
the one of the noble steps to protect these unwanted
babies and reduce the rate of mortality infant in
Malaysia, however, there are strong claims that baby
hatch implemented in Malaysia will bring more
catastrophe than solution.
Beside that,others thesis statement for another group also accepted,however only two group still rejected.
After that,we need to do outline for our essay.
Wednesday
23 January 2013
Today our class at library because Miss zu had something to settle down and asking us to sit in group to discussed and create three thesis statement.We got many idea from the discussion.These was four thesis statement that we created in library
Despite, baby hatch provided by government is the one of the noble step to protect these unwanted babies and reduce the rate of mortality infant in Malaysia, however, there are strong claims that baby hatch implemented in Malaysia will bring more catastrophe than solution.
23 January 2013
Today our class at library because Miss zu had something to settle down and asking us to sit in group to discussed and create three thesis statement.We got many idea from the discussion.These was four thesis statement that we created in library
Despite, baby hatch provided by government is the one of the noble step to protect these unwanted babies and reduce the rate of mortality infant in Malaysia, however, there are strong claims that baby hatch implemented in Malaysia will bring more catastrophe than solution.
Although government provide baby hatch to stop the homicide among the unwanted babies but, there are strong claims that baby hatch provided will bring more negative result an positive ones .
Other claims that baby hatch provided by government is very effective to protect these unwanted babies from being harm however, there are hard evidences that implementation of baby hatch could rise the baby dumping problem and other social problems rather than to protect these unwanted babies from being harm.
In order to reduce the number of homicide among unwanted newborns from being arise, the government has provided baby hatch to protect these unwanted newborns from being abandoned or killed and seems more effective, despite from that some people claims that baby hatch provided give more negative impacts to the babies and community rather than positive impacts.
Tuesday
22nd January 2013
Today Faiz adha and I be a first group presented thesis statement to Miss Zu. We presented our thesis statement but she really mad at us because she wants three thesis statement not one.As we expected she rejected our thesis statement and she want we redo it next week.however,the first group that Miss zue accepted is Atikah groups.After that solihin groups and inayah groups.Tomorrow,Miss Zue want us do a discussion at library.
22nd January 2013
Today Faiz adha and I be a first group presented thesis statement to Miss Zu. We presented our thesis statement but she really mad at us because she wants three thesis statement not one.As we expected she rejected our thesis statement and she want we redo it next week.however,the first group that Miss zue accepted is Atikah groups.After that solihin groups and inayah groups.Tomorrow,Miss Zue want us do a discussion at library.
Wednesday
16 January 2013
Introductory Essay
Today we were learnt how to do a perfect introductory paragraph by using 1 or more hooks to grab reader's attention before we make our own. I show you what we learnt this evening:
The function of introductory
16 January 2013
Introductory Essay
Today we were learnt how to do a perfect introductory paragraph by using 1 or more hooks to grab reader's attention before we make our own. I show you what we learnt this evening:
The function of introductory
¨It attracts the reader’s interest to continue reading the essay / Get the readers’ attention.
¨It supplies background information needed to understand the essay.
¨It presents a thesis statement, the main idea of the essay, usually towards the end of the introduction.
¨It indicates a plan of the essay’s development (optional).
¨Set tone for the rest of the essay
The part of the introductory paragraph
¨The Hook - Designed to grab attention immediately and give
some indication about the essay’s topic
some indication about the essay’s topic
¨
¨The Transition - Moves the reader from the hook to the driving force of the essay….
¨The Thesis Statement - Makes the contract with the reader about what will be discussed without a blatant announcement.
So Fikri and i decided to write our introductory paragraph by using Quotation as our hook. Below is the example of quotation hook that we preferred to:
¨“I am stupid. I am never going back to school.” These are the words spoken by a learning disabled child when he was in first grade. He cried as he slowly walked to his bedroom, shredding his schoolwork into small pieces. This was the first of many times when he and his parents would feel frustrated because there was nothing that they could do. Parents of children with learning disabilities have often felt unprepared to help their children with their handicaps and frustrated with attempts to seek the proper placement of them in the public-school system. The experience of school can be overwhelming for children who have trouble learning. The learning disabled student in the public educational system must deal with academic, social, and emotional problems.
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