Monday
18 February 2013
I had absent today because over slept.I am very sorry..
Tuesday, 19 February 2013
Wednesday
6 February 2013
Alhamdulillah, I am very thankfully to my partner because he helped me to make the best outline.Its was very difficult to do because need to follow rules and format.I am very happy because our outline completely done..So,I want to showed you all our outline:
Our outline is good right?please comment and give good advice that we can improved our outline.
6 February 2013
Alhamdulillah, I am very thankfully to my partner because he helped me to make the best outline.Its was very difficult to do because need to follow rules and format.I am very happy because our outline completely done..So,I want to showed you all our outline:
The negative and positive sides
of providing baby hatch.
I. Introduction :
It is indeed that government provide baby hatch to stop the homicide among the unwanted babies but, there strong claims that baby hatch provided will bring more negative result than positive ones.
II. Body paragraph:
A) Con 1: It can reduce the number of abandoned babies dramatically.
1. According to Nasiruddin H. (n.d.) notes that baby hatch is a place where unwanted babies dumped by their parent.
a) He added that human resources staff will inspect the infants and they will deliver the infants to the Welfare Department after they ensured the infants are in good health.
2. However this factual statement might be inconclusive because not most of unwed couple wants dump their baby in the baby hatch this fact is supported by the annual report from police department shows unwanted baby still dump in uncompatible place.
3. Pro 1: To begin with, unwed couple wants to avoid from being disgraced by community due to their illegal action by dumping their infant in the baby hatch.
a) According to Spokesman for UN Children’s Fund (n.d.) states that unwed mothers are encounter a numerous of social stigma that guide the mother to unsafe abortions then lead them to dump their infant to incompatible place.
B) Con 2: some people say that the implementation of baby hatch good to reduce the rate of infant mortality.
1) It is undeniably that newborns are need high protection to ensure they can survive in this world and give them another chance to live.
a) Harjeet Singh (n.d.) proposes that innocent infant’s life can be rescued by providing baby hatch where these babies can seek a shelter from being harmed.
2) In contrast, researches shown that the baby dumped in the baby hatch could get proper attention in term of health care, food and protection is very essential.
3) Pro : Another reason why baby hatch must not be implemented because it still not utilize effectively .
a) According to Faizah (n.d.) proves that there is still unwed couple dumped and killed their newborn infant by flushing them down the toilet, abandoned them in the dustbin or threw them into the river eventhough baby hatch already implemented.
C) Con 3: For those who are against these ideas may say that we should to dumped the babies at the mosque or welfare centre.
1. Providing baby hatch brings us towards westernization and modernization such as Japan.
a) When modernization absorbs in ourselves it will eliminates good moral values, customs and rules of religions.
2. Pro 3: saving a life is not wrong eventhough it is violate of law under section 317 of the penal code where if you abandon your child below age 12, the parent of the child will serve their life in jail but giving a second chance is one of noble steps.
a) We can’t judge or punish these babies due to their status
b) Everybody deserves a second chance to change their life.
III. Conclusion
According to the numerous weakness and shortcoming what was our government provided for Malaysian people is not permenant solution to curb baby dumping problem , it is proven by many statistics shows baby dumping problem is increasing every year eventhough baby hatch is provided in Malaysia and since the hard evidence provided here proves that everyone should against of baby hatch implementation in Malaysia because it brings more harms than good.
Our outline is good right?please comment and give good advice that we can improved our outline.
Tuesday
5 February 2013
Today we had made correction for our mistake yesterday.We had done conclusion but our outline still incompleted because our material input not enough yet.We still need to surfed internet again to increased our materials.
Faiz adha bring a laptop as usually today and we need to completed our outline before friday,unlikely faiz adha laptop's run out of battery and we need to found laptop to continues our works.So,we asked permission to Miss zu to lend computer in the class. Alhamdulillah,Miss zu gave permission to use UITM computer in the class.We continues our work until class dismiss.
5 February 2013
Today we had made correction for our mistake yesterday.We had done conclusion but our outline still incompleted because our material input not enough yet.We still need to surfed internet again to increased our materials.
Faiz adha bring a laptop as usually today and we need to completed our outline before friday,unlikely faiz adha laptop's run out of battery and we need to found laptop to continues our works.So,we asked permission to Miss zu to lend computer in the class. Alhamdulillah,Miss zu gave permission to use UITM computer in the class.We continues our work until class dismiss.
Monday
4 February 2013
Today our class at Dewan Sri Peria..We need to bring laptop because Miss zu wanted to checked our outline.We was first group checked by Miss zu.She scold us because our outline was not completed,we do not do paraphasing from our materials and our outline also do not followed format from the book. My partner and I forgot to check the format and honestly.we do not know how to make the outline.After that we realize our mistake and tried make correction from our mistake..
4 February 2013
Today our class at Dewan Sri Peria..We need to bring laptop because Miss zu wanted to checked our outline.We was first group checked by Miss zu.She scold us because our outline was not completed,we do not do paraphasing from our materials and our outline also do not followed format from the book. My partner and I forgot to check the format and honestly.we do not know how to make the outline.After that we realize our mistake and tried make correction from our mistake..
Wednesday
30 January 2013
Today our class still with presentation from two group that Miss zu rejected yesterday.then we proceed to introduction.Our grammar,sentences and tenses need to be good if want Miss zu accepted it.She check all introduction one by one.When it comes for our turned,she corrected the error from our introduction.Now,our introduction good and we can go to next level.."OUTLINE"....
30 January 2013
Today our class still with presentation from two group that Miss zu rejected yesterday.then we proceed to introduction.Our grammar,sentences and tenses need to be good if want Miss zu accepted it.She check all introduction one by one.When it comes for our turned,she corrected the error from our introduction.Now,our introduction good and we can go to next level.."OUTLINE"....
Monday
7 January 2013
Today,Miss Zu wanted us to bring laptop for commenting each other in the blog.
I dont have a laptop because my brother borrowed my laptop before this.So I tried to lend a laptop from my friends to do a commenting.
After I bought a laptop,we need to surfed internet from Dewan Seri Peria.Unfortunately, wifi UITM at Dewan Seri Peria was very slow and most of my friends couldn't access the internet.Then Miss zu want us went to library for access the internet.
We arrived at library and surfed internet at computer lab.I opened my blog and comment my friends blog.I am very shock because my follower have one person..The person is Izzat..My blog was quietly not popular than others..So our class was dismiss at 4 o'clock
7 January 2013
Today,Miss Zu wanted us to bring laptop for commenting each other in the blog.
I dont have a laptop because my brother borrowed my laptop before this.So I tried to lend a laptop from my friends to do a commenting.
After I bought a laptop,we need to surfed internet from Dewan Seri Peria.Unfortunately, wifi UITM at Dewan Seri Peria was very slow and most of my friends couldn't access the internet.Then Miss zu want us went to library for access the internet.
We arrived at library and surfed internet at computer lab.I opened my blog and comment my friends blog.I am very shock because my follower have one person..The person is Izzat..My blog was quietly not popular than others..So our class was dismiss at 4 o'clock
Tuesday
29 January 2013
Today we continues our presentation and Miss zu accepted our thesis statement. Alhamdulillah we grateful
because our thesis statement accepted.
Beside that,others thesis statement for another group also accepted,however only two group still rejected.
After that,we need to do outline for our essay.
29 January 2013
Today we continues our presentation and Miss zu accepted our thesis statement. Alhamdulillah we grateful
because our thesis statement accepted.
It is indeed that baby hatch provided by government is
the one of the noble steps to protect these unwanted
babies and reduce the rate of mortality infant in
Malaysia, however, there are strong claims that baby
hatch implemented in Malaysia will bring more
catastrophe than solution.
Beside that,others thesis statement for another group also accepted,however only two group still rejected.
After that,we need to do outline for our essay.
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