Wednesday
6 February 2013



         Alhamdulillah, I am very thankfully to my partner because he helped me to make the best outline.Its was very difficult to do because need to follow rules and format.I am very happy because our outline completely done..So,I want to showed you all our outline:

                             The negative and positive sides

                                  of providing baby hatch.

        I.            Introduction :

It is indeed that government provide baby hatch to stop the homicide     among the unwanted babies but, there strong claims that baby hatch provided will bring more negative result than positive ones.

      II.            Body paragraph:

A)     Con 1:  It can reduce the number of abandoned babies dramatically.

1.       According to Nasiruddin H. (n.d.) notes that baby hatch is a place where unwanted babies dumped by their parent.

a)      He added that human resources staff will inspect the infants and they will deliver the infants to the Welfare Department after they ensured the infants are in good health.

2.       However  this factual statement might be inconclusive because not most of unwed couple wants dump their baby in the baby hatch this fact is supported by the annual report from police department shows unwanted baby still dump in uncompatible place.

3.       Pro 1: To begin with, unwed couple wants to avoid from being disgraced by community due to their illegal action by dumping their infant in the baby hatch.

a)       According to Spokesman for UN Children’s Fund (n.d.) states that unwed mothers are encounter a numerous of social stigma that  guide the mother to unsafe abortions then lead them to dump their infant to incompatible place.

B)      Con 2:  some people say that the implementation of baby hatch  good to  reduce the rate of infant mortality.

1)      It is undeniably  that newborns are need high protection to ensure they can survive in this world and give them another chance to live.

a)       Harjeet Singh (n.d.) proposes that innocent infant’s life can be rescued by providing baby hatch where these babies can seek a shelter from being harmed.

2)      In contrast, researches shown that  the baby dumped in the baby hatch could get proper attention in term of health care, food and protection is very essential.

3)      Pro :  Another reason why baby hatch must not be implemented because it still not utilize effectively .

a)      According to Faizah (n.d.) proves  that there is still unwed couple dumped and killed their newborn infant by flushing them down the toilet, abandoned them in the dustbin or threw them into the river eventhough baby hatch already implemented.

C)      Con 3:  For those who are against these ideas may say that we should to dumped the babies at the mosque or welfare centre.

1.       Providing baby hatch brings us towards westernization and modernization such as Japan.

a)      When modernization absorbs in ourselves it will eliminates good moral values, customs and rules of religions.

2.       Pro 3:  saving a life is not wrong eventhough it is violate of law under section 317 of the penal code where if you abandon your child  below age 12, the parent of the child will serve their life in jail but giving a second chance is one of noble steps.

a)      We can’t judge or punish these babies due to their status

b)      Everybody deserves a second chance  to change their life.

    III.            Conclusion

According to the numerous weakness and shortcoming what was our government provided for Malaysian people is not permenant solution to curb baby dumping problem , it is proven by many statistics shows baby dumping  problem is increasing every year eventhough baby hatch is provided  in Malaysia and since the hard evidence provided  here proves that everyone should against of baby hatch implementation in Malaysia because it brings more harms than good.

Our outline is good right?please comment and give good advice that we can improved our outline.